My owl

[wintersky]

Name: Sky
Type of Owl: Barn
Classification: Tyto Alba
Gender: female
Age: young-adult
Allegiance: Free-flyer
Role in life: Hireclaw (assasin)
Mate: none yet

Short sentence: e.g Large barn owl with a scarred face.
A strangely black barn owl that has a scar on her left side of the face.

Picture: Optional, doesn't need one but its always better to work off something: media.photobucket.com/image/Black%20Barn%20owl/wyomingwinterwolf/black-barn-owl.jpg

Detailed description:
Black feathers that can blend into darkness, black eyes like all tytos have, can blend well in dark. Has a single red feather that symbolizes her families death. Steel battle claws that are also strangely black. She has evil eyes that seem very mean and cruel but is actually hiding the sweetness behind it.

Personality:
Mean but becomes warmer and kinder once she gets to know you.
She can snap and be bipolar every so often but she helps anyone in need. Good or bad. She likes to fly a lot and is very smart. She doesn't put up with nonsense. She can be nice. She is very loyal to her work and when she gets a job she makes sure her customer is satisfied. Likes to fly around and loves to be a proud hireclaw.

History: Lost parents in forest fire. She had a sister that turned on her and died fighting against her. Her sister was a turn feather, her dad was a retired warrior, and her mom was a gadfeather.

Roleplay Example: (I don't know if this is what you mean.)
Sky flew towards tyto forest. When she got there she glided in towards a Blue Fir and landed. She walked into her hollow and laid down right as the sun came up.
Her favorite saying. "Don't touch me so easily!"


Where did you find us: I found you guys on the warriors wish.com site. Or is that not what you mean.

Other information: I make fanfictions. or is that not what you mean?

[Ruby]

Okay, there are some issues. First is that you need to expand on her personality. As it is now, other members wouldn't be able to really get a grasp of your owl.

It would also help if you went into more detail with her history so she seems more real. The roleplay example is just a speech and needs to be more fleshed out. The roleplay example is the part where you actually roleplay as your character in an environment.

The part saying "she likes to fly a lot and is very smart" is in the wrong section and should be included in her personality rather then thrown in the roleplay example. Anything dealing with her past or family should be included in the history.

Please look over the character form and look at a completed application as a model of what we want in the application.

[wintersky]

Did I modify it correctly?

[petalstar1999]

Name: Dark
Nickname ; Title : " The Hunter "
Type of Owl: Barn Owl
Classification: Tyto Alba
Gender: female
Age: She has forgotten many things about herself including this however she is young-adult
Allegiance: Guardian
Rank: Full-Guardian
Chaw: Hunting
Mate: She is trying to get one

Short sentence: Large barn owl with scared wings .

Picture: look up Barn owls on google

Detailed description: Green eyes ,

Personality: Dark is a very kind owl but if you upset her you pay the cost . She doesn't like to be distracted from a mission , Yes young owls may ask her things about where she lived and things .

History: Dark has faced many foes up until now and lost her family in a Forest fire caused by a pureone all but her brother and sister are dead . She has gone to the northern kingdoms in search of help for her sister and brother. For a time she lived in the northern kingdoms. Her father and mother knew Sky for a bit and her parents but until that dreadful night things were never the same , Dark has sworn vengance on the pureones for the death of her parents .

Roleplay Example: " Raven you can't i need your help , Is this how our friendship will end , in darkness ? " " If so then GOOD BYE RAVEN FOREVER ! "

Where did you find us: warriorswish or wth its called

[wintersky]

Hiya Dark! Don't we have to wait to be accepted?